Accountability Act I, Scene One

Act I, Scene One

Scene: Outside the institution

SETTING: EXT. GRASSY AREA OUTSIDE AT WHISPERING PINES – DAY

AT RISE: VANESSA and PRISCILLA sit on the grass. VANESSA scratches at her arms, her gaze shifting around the grounds.

VANESSA
(Smiling, but with a hint of strain) It’s such a lovely day out.

PRISCILLA
A perfect day for dreaming… at Whispering Pines.

VANESSA
Where all your dreams turn into nightmares.

They laugh, but it feels a little forced. The laughter lingers, almost desperate, before fading into an uneasy silence.

VANESSA
(Distressed, scratching more) Five years, three months, two days… I can’t take this anymore. I keep saying it’s too much!

PRISCILLA
You reek of desperation, you know.

VANESSA
(Bitterly) Desperate to get out.

PRISCILLA
I’m right there with you. (Noticing Vanessa scratching) Hey, you’re doing it again.

VANESSA
(Dropping to the ground, rolling in the grass) I just want to roll away… like I’m not even here.

PRISCILLA reaches out to help her up but hesitates. She kneels next to VANESSA, her voice soft.

PRISCILLA
Come on, Vanessa. It’s time to go back inside.

VANESSA
(Murmuring as she stares at the sky) No, this is the moment. It’s right here. I’m meant to get out, slip away… before they even notice.

PRISCILLA
(Looking around, nervous) They’ll notice.

Enter MRS. MARBLE, briskly approaching, carrying a small tray with two pill cups and two syringes. Her voice is cold, calculated.

MRS. MARBLE
Vanessa, Priscilla… back inside. Now.

PRISCILLA
(Standing defiantly) One day, I’m going to be on a real stage, far away from here.

MRS. MARBLE
(With a mocking smile) Yes, yes, Priscilla. You’ve told me. (Turning her gaze to VANESSA) And you, Vanessa, don’t start with the dramatics.

VANESSA
(Stands abruptly, eyes darting around) You don’t get it! The red line… it brought back all the memories. They said it wasn’t there, but I saw it. I know I did.

PRISCILLA steps closer to VANESSA, trying to calm her, while glancing nervously at MRS. MARBLE.

PRISCILLA
(To MRS. MARBLE) Can’t we just have our twenty minutes?

MRS. MARBLE
(Pulling out a small cup of pills) Time’s up. Take your medication, Priscilla.

VANESSA sits back down, hard, glaring up at MRS. MARBLE.

VANESSA
Nobody listened. They never listened. (Voice cracking) She wouldn’t go.It wasn’t my fault… it was never my fault. 

MRS. MARBLE crouches down, her voice cold and patronizing.

MRS. MARBLE
(Quietly) Vanessa, your seams are showing. You’re late for your medication. Take these pills, or I’ll have to take more… drastic measures.

VANESSA picks at a blade of grass, putting it in her mouth. PRISCILLA hums softly, the effect of her medication taking hold.

VANESSA
(Leaning toward MRS. MARBLE, whispering fiercely) You can’t stop me. None of you can. I love every twist and turn… even the unknown.

MRS. MARBLE, unmoved, pulls out a syringe and jabs VANESSA. VANESSA’s body slackens, her eyes closing as she chants softly.

(Voice trailing off) This sucks. This sucks. This sucks.

BLACKOUT

Synopsis

Accountability is a raw and compelling exploration of trauma, control, and the search for freedom within a family fractured by emotional abuse. Vanessa, a teenage girl institutionalized at the oppressive and surreal Whispering Pines, navigates its challenges alongside fellow residents Priscilla and Cameron. Under the watchful eyes of Mrs. Marble and Dr. Clinician, the teens fight to maintain their sanity and sense of self. Flashbacks reveal Vanessa’s fraught relationship with her father, Sean, and expose the generational cycles of trauma and emotional volatility that shape their world. Sean’s therapy sessions lay bare his struggle to change, wrestling with the push and pull between love and anger. Vanessa’s yearning for freedom, intertwined with her mother’s difficult choices, underscores a narrative steeped in resilience, cycles of abuse, and the fight for self-identity in the face of overwhelming odds.

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